Nowadays in many countries people are following the latest fashion hairstyles and so on Is it a positive or negative development

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Nowadays in many countries, people are following the latest fashion, hairstyles and so on. Is it a positive or negative development?

Fashion is of great importance in the life of people today. Many people are being more fashion-conscious compared to the past. In my opinion, that people try hard to keep up with the latest trends is more of a negative trend than a positive one.

Fashion trendsetters and their followers are advocatory of this practice due to the positive impacts that staying fashionably updated could bring to wearers. First of all, fashion is often perceived as a way of identifying oneself. By following fashion trends, an individual is able to show his identity and interest to his peers and also express hims...

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