Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?
Careers tend to give a sense of purpose to one's life. However, in today's modern world, occupations have become the source of anxiety. The harsh living conditions and expenses of everyday life are pressuring numerous people to work longer and undertake troublesome tasks. A way to tackle this obstacle is for governments to mend the economic structure. This essay will discuss the aforementioned problem and its possible solution in detail.
The main source of income for countless families is the wages they earn through hard work. The more the income, the higher the quality of life. Current circumstances and fragile economic system are countries have lowered pay grades while expenses are still high. Provided that, many struggle at their jobs to earn more or get a promotion. Although jobs are stressful, they're still accepted for money. Employees, for instance, work overtime and meet deadlines by any means merely to find financial support. Therefore, the main reason which is compelling to strive is money.
A way to address this issue at hand is for the authorities to be held responsible. Governments must do all in their power to rehabilitate the system in order to aid society financially. In addition, not only prices should be lowered but also payments should increase. In Scandinavian countries, for example, workers are present up to eight hours a day and are effortlessly able to have their needs met. Therefore, increasing salary and economic growth can greatly affect labor relations.
To conclude, in our modern world, careers pressure many. It is vital for the situation to improve. The officials in charge must take action at once. Hopefully someday, the well-being of citizens becomes a priority, not monetary matters.
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get satisfaction in their career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result Why do so many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 47
- Society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging Do you agree or disagree 78
- Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released Why is this the case What can be done to solve this problem 56
- Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released Why is this the case What can be done to solve this problem 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...eers tend to give a sense of purpose to ones life. However, in todays modern world, ...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many struggles'.
Suggestion: many struggles
...expenses are still high. Provided that, many struggle at their jobs to earn more or get a pro...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...promotion. Although jobs are stressful, theyre still accepted for money. Employees, fo...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs met" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'met' or 'to be met'.
Suggestion: met; to be met
...e effortlessly able to have their needs met. Therefore, increasing salary and econo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22775800712 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79194139282 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640569395018 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6939955222 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.9523809524 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177607905829 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422407301897 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345906234295 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876148210653 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459772775278 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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