A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Traveling has long been an incredibly popular means of having fun. Therefore, there are numerous countries that are financially supported by tourism. Although travelers are a fruitful source of income, there can be harmful consequences. Environmental damage, for instance, can make living conditions dreadful for the residents. From my standpoint, if the trips are handled properly, the benefits far outweigh the obstacles.
Tourism has a superb impact on the economical structure of countries. Many who visit a country have no fear of spending large sums of money for their comfort or pleasure. Visitors, for instance, pay for usually overpriced hotels or cuisines with little or no hesitation while on vacation. This reckless spending nourishes the destination country economically and improves the lives of natives. Provided that, tourism plays a crucial role in prospering the quality of life in a region.
However, damage to the environment and nature can aggravate the conditions in a country. In most parts of the world, it has been reported that travelers tend to be ignorant towards nature and their surroundings. countless of them, for example, litter while sightseeing or damage landmarks. Furthermore, transportation done by cars and airplanes releases harmful gases and fumes into the atmosphere. The polluted air can impact the well-being of people. Having said that, tourism can lead to long-term damages to nature.
Finally, to my way of thinking, the advantages of this industry win against the drawbacks. The financial aid provided not only makes living easier but also creates various job opportunities. Citizens of countries that are visited frequently are hired in hotels, restaurants, and guided tours and make a living. Although pollution may have drastic consequences, feasible answers can be sought. In the light of the details explained, tourism is both vital and lucrative.
To conclude, the influences of tourism are extremely advantageous, The contamination of nature, however, must be stopped. If each individual accepts hic responsibility, the situation which we are at can be rehabilitated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... Tourism has a superb impact on the economical structure of countries. Many who visit ...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Countless
... towards nature and their surroundings. countless of them, for example, litter while sigh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5490797546 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12495398739 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631901840491 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.4586596805 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.652173913 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1739130435 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209602248423 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555515065598 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524123970943 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1144572994 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311340149934 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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