Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Working out is an extremely crucial element in maintaining health. However, data suggests that people who work exercise a little or not at all during weekdays and even on weekends. This issue has caused numerous health problems for them. Nevertheless, there are ways to tackle this problem. This essay will go into detail about this matter and its possible solution.
First, working conditions leave little extra time for people to attend to their health. In other words, the competition in the workspace, anxiety of upcoming deadlines, and overwhelming tasks are pressuring many into working for longer hours. Provided that, most workers enjoy passive activities in their free time. They prefer watching TV or spending quality time with their loved ones. In addition to that, man’s dependence on technology consumes a lot of time. Instead of exercising or going for a walk, valuable time is spent browsing the internet or on social media platforms.
The best way to address this issue is to encourage working out. Companies can dedicate a part of the working hours to exercise. Coworkers will have fun spending time together. Therefore, employees will then not only train, but also enjoy doing it. Another solution could be organizied outdoor activities promoted by governements. Authorities can arrange different groups for various activities such as cycling or walking. These groups gather together in parks or other public places once or twice a week in order to be trained by a professional. Moreover, many can work out, have fun, and find new friends as well.
In conclusion, stressful working conditions and wasting time on the internet is damaging the health of our working society. If these obstacles are not tackled by people in charge, the consequences will be dire. Organized activities and training during workhours can be prove be to be beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23255813953 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73015728275 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634551495017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.277445314 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5909090909 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6818181818 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376426473912 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950502039395 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612591879144 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218543662194 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356176962372 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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