Main purpose of education in schools is to educate the children on various subjects. However, now the question arises, whether the children should be taught history as a subject in schools or they should study those subjects which is vital according to present time. In the below paragraphs, i will discuss both the views before giving my opinion.
Some people believe that connection roots are important more specifically in academic subjects so, that the children would know how the things started , they should know the reasons and past outcomes so that the children would able to corelate it to present. History as a subject is significant for students in their academics, as it has indirect link with science , geography and other subjects. Absence of history will break the connection and would become difficulty to do research with partial knowledge and get it's finding for future scientists.
School is the place where the children get to learn about various subjects, including history which will help these children to have better understanding and knowledge about the things which is good for their development.
Nonetheless, there are certain people who believe that children should study those subjects only which is essential for today's day to day life. According to them, subject which is in demand school should include and teach them to their students . In this way, children will not get burden on their studies and study what is required . Presently, people are focusing on science and technology, mathematics, computer, English, general awareness and many more are the subjects which is more helpful for modern everyday life. Guardians want to see their child to get settle and earn good in future, for that reason they want their child to study on subjects which have present and will have future scope. They find direct link of above subjects and will save the time and children will utilize their time on important things.
To sum up, people hold contrasting views for history as a subject , to be taught in school or not but, in my opinion , if we want our children to have better understanding it is essential to have good knowledge on history combined with other subjects to ensure their awareness won't get limited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07027027027 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55323027453 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3803307543 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368868221014 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131454502268 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776808586585 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214797341092 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562259404126 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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