The following appeared in the newsletter distributed at a recent political rally.
over the past year, the consolidated copper company (CCC) has purchased over one million square miles of the land in the tropical nation of west Fredonia. Mining copper on this land will inevitably result in the pollution and environmental disaster, since West Fredonia is home to the several endangered animal species. But such disaster can be prevented if the consumers simply refuse to purchase products that are made with CCC's until the company abandons its mining plans.
In author write a letter to thepolitical rally and assert that because of the Cpnsolidated Copper Company had been explorted lotd of copper in the current year. It cause lots of envirmental disaster which in and of itselfes was dengerus to the animals those their habitat were in the company minning regin.
I distinguishes some weaknesses in the argument which need lots of studies in some groundes. First, I admit that copper was dengerous material and it tooks several years to clear from the envirment, but I want to take your notice to that the copper company was located there for a several year. Therefore, there should be another reason for the envirmental disaster. On the other hand, I think that the weather condition should have been studies. Besides, for getting convincing result from the experiment they should have to take two group of the same spacies of the animal, one nearby the copper company and other a bite far from the company , from where the company pullotion don’t affect to their envirment. Maybe other problem was the cause of the envirmental disester. In those experiment by making study in the population of the two group and their envirmantal changes they can clearly undersand what was the main reson of the envirmental changes.
Second, maybe another compony begenning it is work and wind or water gets it is polution to tthat envirment and causes the envirmental disaster. maybe it pulloted the water or the air which is the main sources of the forest and envirmental living may be it causes the acidical raining in those envirment and cause the huge disested or mabye two company pollution combined with eachither and causes a very hamful and morthal results. However, the author didn’t mention to the new companuies which are begane workin nearby those envirment.
The last but not the least, maybe a change was occures in the food chain in that envirment because of the global warming or other reason and causes a huge disasters in the envirment. or maybe this changes was the natural cycle of that envirment which need a varied and expantion study.
In sum, I think that the author need to make notice to the piontes that I mantioned some of them above to make it’s argument strong and cinvincing. As condemning a compony and wanting to closing that means lots of the people whom lose their job and in my opinion it can effected to the economic condition of the regin and need lots of studies before acting immediately.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In author write a letter to thepolitical rally and assert that because of the Cpnsolidated Copper Company had been explorted lotd of copper in the current year.
Error: lotd Suggestion: load
Error: thepolitical Suggestion: theological
Error: explorted Suggestion: explored
Sentence: It cause lots of envirmental disaster which in and of itselfes was dengerus to the animals those their habitat were in the company minning regin.
Error: minning Suggestion: mining
Error: regin Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dengerus Suggestion: dangers
Error: itselfes Suggestion: itself
Error: envirmental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: I distinguishes some weaknesses in the argument which need lots of studies in some groundes.
Error: groundes Suggestion: grounds
Sentence: First, I admit that copper was dengerous material and it tooks several years to clear from the envirment, but I want to take your notice to that the copper company was located there for a several year.
Error: tooks Suggestion: took
Error: dengerous Suggestion: dangerous
Error: envirment Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Therefore, there should be another reason for the envirmental disaster.
Error: envirmental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Besides, for getting convincing result from the experiment they should have to take two group of the same spacies of the animal, one nearby the copper company and other a bite far from the company , from where the company pullotion don't affect to their envirment.
Error: pullotion Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: spacies Suggestion: spaces
Error: envirment Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Maybe other problem was the cause of the envirmental disester.
Error: disester Suggestion: disaster
Error: envirmental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In those experiment by making study in the population of the two group and their envirmantal changes they can clearly undersand what was the main reson of the envirmental changes.
Error: undersand Suggestion: understand
Error: envirmantal Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: reson Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: envirmental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Second, maybe another compony begenning it is work and wind or water gets it is polution to tthat envirment and causes the envirmental disaster. maybe it pulloted the water or the air which is the main sources of the forest and envirmental living may be it causes the acidical raining in those envirment and cause the huge disested or mabye two company pollution combined with eachither and causes a very hamful and morthal results.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: disested Suggestion: digested
Error: compony Suggestion: company
Error: eachither Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: morthal Suggestion: mortal
Error: envirment Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: acidical Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: polution Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: mabye Suggestion: maybe
Error: begenning Suggestion: beginning
Error: pulloted Suggestion: pulled
Error: hamful Suggestion: harmful
Error: tthat Suggestion: than
Error: envirmental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: However, the author didn't mention to the new companuies which are begane workin nearby those envirment.
Error: begane Suggestion: began
Error: companuies Suggestion: companies
Error: workin Suggestion: working
Error: didn Suggestion: did
Error: envirment Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The last but not the least, maybe a change was occures in the food chain in that envirment because of the global warming or other reason and causes a huge disasters in the envirment. or maybe this changes was the natural cycle of that envirment which need a varied and expantion study.
Error: occures Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: expantion Suggestion: expansion
Error: envirment Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In sum, I think that the author need to make notice to the piontes that I mantioned some of them above to make it's argument strong and cinvincing.
Error: piontes Suggestion: points
Error: cinvincing Suggestion: convincing
Error: mantioned Suggestion: mentioned
Sentence: As condemning a compony and wanting to closing that means lots of the people whom lose their job and in my opinion it can effected to the economic condition of the regin and need lots of studies before acting immediately.
Error: regin Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: compony Suggestion: company
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 39 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 425 350
No. of Characters: 2003 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.54 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.713 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.465 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.548 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... lotd of copper in the current year. It cause lots of envirmental disaster which in a...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'distinguish'
Suggestion: distinguish
... were in the company minning regin. I distinguishes some weaknesses in the argument which n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'several years'.
Suggestion: several years
... copper company was located there for a several year. Therefore, there should be another rea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ny and other a bite far from the company , from where the company pullotion don&ap...
^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Maybe
...nt and causes the envirmental disaster. maybe it pulloted the water or the air which ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...es of the forest and envirmental living may be it causes the acidical raining in those...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 544, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e begane workin nearby those envirment. The last but not the least, maybe a chan...
^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disaster'?
Suggestion: disaster
...rming or other reason and causes a huge disasters in the envirment. or maybe this changes...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...uses a huge disasters in the envirment. or maybe this changes was the natural cycl...
^^
Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
...lose their job and in my opinion it can effected to the economic condition of the regin ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, may, second, so, therefore, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 11.1786427146 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 28.8173652695 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 423.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86761229314 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56354688867 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468085106383 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5686365098 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6875 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 23.324526521 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.70786347227 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0761010278846 0.218282227539 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250886033804 0.0743258471296 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475596155262 0.0701772020484 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364985662889 0.128457276422 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048830357493 0.0628817314937 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 98.500998004 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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