Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than work for a company Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantage of being self employed

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

In the recent year, the trend has been changed towards method of jobs. Majority of the worker and professional are prefer to work independently from their homes, or provide their services with their connections. However, it has their own drawbacks for worker and skilled person, in the course of the essay, I will draw a picture of this situation, with their negative.

Firstly, these days technology was improved by giving opportunity to everyone to connect by internet. Individual are available on internet in terms to sell their services, other side, job provider connect to person that suite him. In this process people are able to do work at more than one place. Secondly, It offers freedom to professionals complete their task according their time. This way, people might save money which they on travelling to office. For instance, a person is working video making organization from morning to evening, instead of if he makes own videos their daily life and up lode on social plateform which pay him. He had free time to do other things, and he is able to manage their life according to their desires.

However, work from homes had some serious drawbacks in long term perspective. Work is not always available to them because for one job many people try to get it, due this the competition may be increase. People do not benefits which company provides to their employees. Working in company gives assurance of monthly salary although this benefit is not available to those people who work from home.

In conclusion, doing jobs independently gives freedom time and way of life, while it does not have guarantee to get work each day and salary came end of each month.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...rity of the worker and professional are prefer to work independently from their homes,...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... with their negative. Firstly, these days technology was improved by giving oppor...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...petition may be increase. People do not benefits which company provides to their employe...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'guaranteed'.
Suggestion: guaranteed
...and way of life, while it does not have guarantee to get work each day and salary came en...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90526315789 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57767960246 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.451835736 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125853198268 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465373592288 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571773551767 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075717638062 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711095468401 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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