Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

Why might this be the case?

What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Working in a big company usually brings a stable income, but many people nowadays tend to run their own companies and make money only for themselves instead of others. To be self-employed, however, can result in more risks.

Some senior students seeking for highly paid jobs choose to start their business after graduation. On one hand, university gives them freedom to balance their time and study. Therefore, they are more willing to have more control on their time in their work than to be restricted by rules in companies. And then they refuse the offer from well-known companies and they become the boss of their companies. On the other hand, under so much pressure from society and family, employees cannot earn enough money to purchase a house in cities and support other household expenses since the boss can get more money than them. For example, the salary of a boss is usually well over three times as much as their employee's. Thus, in order to get more money, starting their own business can be a good choice.

Nevertheless, to be self-employed might bring drawbacks as well. Firstly, there is a great possibility that most people will not gain money due to lack of experience. A successful company entails skillful workers, excellent management and a location which can attract numerous customers. But for a newbie, those requirements are not fulfilled. Secondly, the products from those small companies are not as competitive as those from famous companies. For instance, if a person owns a small western food restaurant, there is an excellent chance that there will be fewer customers in his restaurant than the big restaurants next to his due to the flavour. A profitable restaurant requires a special flavor. But the food in a new restaurant of a manager with little experience can be not competitive.

In conclusion, although to be the boss enables people to be free from the regulations of companies or organizations, this choice contains a lot of risks.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99093655589 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81575210995 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564954682779 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6240877182 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284947012213 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907455771791 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942556765305 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206972941661 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690027842534 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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