Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
The number of people choosing to start their own businesses and be self-employed has been in a bloom lately, as the people are growing frustrated with the work structure in their office jobs. But there are a plethora of issues associated with working for yourself, which are described in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, people nowadays view their work as a part of their lifestyle, rather than something that is to be done sustain a living. They want to work without the bounds of an office, with noone watching over their heads, which they can achieve by working for themselves. Moreover, being self employed provides people with the freedom of flexible timing, while working from anywhere they like rather than being in the bounds of a cubical, which justifies the appeal of self-employment to the youths. In addition, not having a part in the unnecessary office culture is the added advantage liked by most introverts, contributing the raise to fame of self-employment.
Meanwhile, running an personal business means the problems associated are to be faced and shorted after by a single person as well. The major disadvantage of being self-employed is the lack of trust among the customers, as most of such businesses are run by youths, leading to a hassle in finding people to buy their services. Moreover, people who are mostly freelancers are ofter provided with task assignments in a seasonal basis, such that the income is often unstable, which wouldn’t be the case in an office job. Additionally, self-run businesses are often the ones targetted by scammers and frauds, rather than heavily secured multinational companies, as they are easy to pursue.
To conclude, people nowadays are gravitated towards being self-employed, with the often glamorized notion of flexible timings, no supervisors and work from home opportunities, but there are a myriad of disadvantages linked to it, including unstable earning, lack of trust among customers and getting targetted by scammers, which often remains unnoticed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... self-employment. Meanwhile, running an personal business means the problems as...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...Meanwhile, running an personal business means the problems associated are to be faced...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...rom home opportunities, but there are a myriad of disadvantages linked to it, includin...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... scammers, which often remains unnoticed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25460122699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99610980161 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8009334226 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.727272727 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375713731711 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149465348336 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10262338967 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235017743776 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577786350018 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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