Nowadays, mobile phones and internet have become increasingly important in people’s social life.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, smart phones and internet have become raisingly significant in human's social life. In my oppinion this views has both benefit and drawback with each persone and each occupation. The following essay will analyse this statement more clearly.
On the one hand, the internet keep a huge function in people's life. The networks have a large source of data and it can answer everythings that people want to know. Furthermore, the internet also help people's life become more convenience and easier. internet can reply some human's demand, it can help some teenagers entertain or relax after their lesson. For instance, with the appear of game children can relax, repose and bait following that, students will take a distance away from stress.
On the other hand, if people depend too much on the internet, they will become lazier and also with some wrong knowledge which did not confirm by professtional will be affect to the people's improment. Moreover, when teenagers entertain too much on the internet, they will very easy to get addicted. this is a reason why some students can not concentrate for learning and get a terrible achivement. For example, children play game with their frirends at night, this will make them very tired and out of power. teenager will not have enough energy for the next day.
To conclude, althouh the internet have plenty of advantages, it also remain some nagative aspects. people have to know which is its benefit and drawback for improving themsleves beter than before and the development of their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04296875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49914230893 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58203125 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3617358247 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224839377802 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859989238471 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782688592361 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146974124124 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455046147698 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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