The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some human tell that team sports at scholl is the best method to help teenagers to collaborate. In my opinion team sport can teach children really good about the cooperation but this is not the best way. So this essay will discuss about the advantage and disadvandtage of this assignment.
On the one hand, let talk about the benifit of children learn cooperate through team sports at school. It will help youngs know the important of teamwork. They help each other when having difficul and work together to cope with any challenge. Furthermore, Learning cooperation through teamsports also train for their discipline and obey the rules of teams. For intance, children need go to team meeting right time. And these are a lot of sport that teach them the comradeship not play for their own like football, basketball,volleyball...
On the other hand, team sports with children do not have enough ability will let them lazy, bored and also affaid for face to face with their teammate. With the bad friend and bad teammate they will laugh on their face that make them shy and maybe pressure. And also their friend will angry with them because they are the reason for the lost of teams. Moreover, these are a lot of better method for teach children to collaborate. for intance, like doing in the project this need them use their brain not their strong. so the collaborate is need to be shown more sightly than through team sports.
To conclude, team sport is a good tip for train their cooperation but it have both benifit and disadvantage. And also these are a lot of beter way for learnning. So parents have to choose rightly way for help their children better and better than their self in the past for have bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72757475083 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59329087435 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478405315615 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0131139767 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0555555556 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233650941014 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867817859358 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912826890624 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165973141336 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658704755859 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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