Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
There are a lot of people think that should not start a family early today. There are a number of reasons for this and the trend has a significant impact on both marital life and on the community as a whole.
There are two important reasons why spouse’s decision having children late leads to an increasingly popular trend. Firstly, many individuals consider that success in work is top-priority rather than embarking on parenthood and bringing up the offspring. The performance of duties at home and at work would be ineffective if they had to allocate it fairly .In addition, parents build their own successful careers to ensure the child will not lack condition. Secondly, more people delaying childbirth will obtain countless opportunities for them to pursue their interests and hobbies or even to travel around the world.
However, this tendency could have negative effects in term of both family and society. An important effect for a family is that the generation gap between parents and offspring will decrease a bond in their relationship due to the misunderstanding of parents to communicate and relate to their children. Another impact is that if women get pregnant after 35 years old, they will carry more potential health risks and this could increase the danger of infants are capable of stillbirth or miscarriage. Consequently, this will negatively affect the quality of workforce and community in the future.
In conclusion, there are a number of evident reasons for the trend that people give birth late. As a result, this could adversely influence families and societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88501535689 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4710914463 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197469024117 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651342692438 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405453838395 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113008396327 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206495609118 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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