Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.
What are the reasons?
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the recent world, there is a rising tendency that people opt to have children later in their life. This is the implication of elevated concentration on personal achievements in people's profession and desire for freedom. Some people might opine that this phenomenon poses a threat to the possibility of fertility; however, I believe the advantages far exceed that potential drawback.
The major rationale behind later parenthood is that people wish to seek professional accomplishments before having children. There are some beliefs that the younger a person is, the more likely they can succeed in their career path. This is true because youth gives people more opportunities to grow and explore novel prospects of their occupation; therefore, because of this motive, there is a greater possibility that the young commit themselves harder to pursuing their careers and promising life-long targets, resulting in postponing their parenthood. The situation is also coupled with the enjoyment of their youth. Younger generations hold the belief that they only live once and thereby they have the right to explore the world without any restriction of parenthood or children. Having children may present problems related to the decrease in their pastime and increased workload. The young, however, need more time for themselves, especially to gain new experiences, which means becoming parents will be a deterrent to their freedom.
Despite the abovementioned reasons, opponents of delayed parenthood contend that this situation can be a contributing factor to the lower rate of fertility. If parents make a decision of childbearing later in their life, they are likely to suffer from diseases related to the ability to have a child. This can be evidenced by the research from MIT which reported that the majority of women in their late 30s had to face the possibility of not having a child since their eggs were insufficient and even infertile for having children, let alone giving birth. Despite this disadvantage, I maintain that delaying parenthood is beneficial considering financial preparation for childbearing. Because the majority of young people have dedicated their youth to working, they may have a certain amount of saving money which can be utilized for their future parenthood. This can assist them in applying for parenting courses in order to gain more information about a child's care, nutrition for newborns, or how to overcome difficulties emerging while taking care of a child. Not only is this helpful for the young's parenting period, but also the child can take advantage of their parent's money, especially for a full development of both physical and intellectual aspects.
In conclusion, it is true that the younger generation tends to delay their parenthood considering their commitment to personal development and their desire to explore the world. Although this can open some certain disadvantages, one of which is the lower chance of fertility, I believe the benefit related to financial ability has a greater weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 481.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33471933472 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93248088804 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2708005736 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.052631579 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3157894737 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285558147689 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991906350681 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058224396777 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191297006727 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713216710353 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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