Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly. Why is it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Technical advancement has created a new world, which no one could have imagined in previous scenario. Although it has brought flexibility, comfort and standardized the way of living, but it has also increased the demand in individuals to get things done as quickly as possible. This behavior of human being is taking them away from humanity and intellectual values. The forthcoming paragraphs would vindicate my inclination.
There are three key factors cultivating these kind of habits in civilian, initially, due to expectation. As people spend sky-high amount in buying any product or become available on time. For instance, if a person buy a latest car model and delivery doesn't happen on expected time, the individual become impatient and may have to procrastinate plan due to delay in delivery. Moreover, due to hectic lifestyle people do not want to waste time in waiting for anything, as everyone is running around for achieving a goal. Furthermore, individuals want to show off their richness to others by acquiring any new gadget or vehicle, which incite envy in other and create desire to get those things instantly. Hence, all above points illustrates the reason which is encouraging this behavior in human beings.
All these reasons are making human being less patience and more arrogant, and dragging them towards inhumanity. To exemplify, when a person order food online and due to some valid reasons if a delivery boy deliver the food after expected time the customer without asking any justification shout on delivery boy, which shows the inhumanity in a person because of impatience. Moreover, it is a common problem in rural areas where the internet is either slow or inaccessible and it is not uncommon for individuals addicted to instant satisfaction to panic when they lose connectivity. Thus, these negative aspects are dragging the society to dark side.
To recapitulate, human beings want to get everything done instantly, which is indirectly leading them to lose patience as well as ethnic values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... on time. For instance, if a person buy a latest car model and delivery doesnt ha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...son buy a latest car model and delivery doesnt happen on expected time, the individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21712538226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90331179665 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1657863432 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123034018518 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355894162059 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381986673107 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071347571946 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170080919105 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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