Nowadays more and more people wants to get things done instantly.(information, services, task). why is this ?Is it positive or negative development.?
It is true that, people are more impatient in terms of getting news, assistance, and task rather need everything ready made. The main reason behind such nature is by the enhancement of information technology and technical development. However, although, there are some negative consequences, which helps the community in many ways such as, disaster management, immediate medical care and powerful job opportunities.
Automation services has been spreading rapidly in terms of live news updates, missed call customer care services and availability of vacancies. Political, environmental, information live news updates make people minds to set with fast going and impatient to wait for news hour broadcast or early morning news paper. Similarly, innovative gadget makes up even distant or other continental information just on finger tips. Owing to the growing modern world makes up people mind in express way from the childhood itself. For instance, earlier, people could wait postman to get regards of beloved ones through letters from far. While, today everything on finger tips through modern cell phones for chat or video call and so on. Moreover, services from companies or agencies often wait long time to repair or accept complaints though, today which is just by missed call or SMS services.
However, this trending impatience makes up advantages like environmental hazards, medical attention and service care information's to the core. Such as, live telecasting weather reports allow people to be in safe zone and lesser chance of catastrophic effect of environmental hazards. Likewise, instant medical services helps many people to seek early detection and prompt care from multi specialty hospital support suddenly through emergency ambulance services and so on. Furthermore, sudden task achievement would lead to predominant chance to get jobs like IT department, software divisions. Emerging instantaneous nature would help students to clarify doubts and intriguing more understanding of wast things be mature enough with knowledge.
To sum up, in my perspective, nevertheless, impatient makes problems like conflicts, misunderstanding, other mentioned benefits would lead to this behaviour in top position as compared to downside action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...or news hour broadcast or early morning news paper. Similarly, innovative gadget makes up ...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...behaviour in top position as compared to downside action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, while, for instance, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68343195266 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99462217702 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636094674556 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6821816897 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136727930025 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423808788607 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424818849599 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836567793167 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387646177694 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.