Living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
it is some argued that health could be affected if everyone live in mega cities. While I agree with the appearance of healthy service and infrastructure in urban that would bring out benefits. I believe that city life would be effect on health.
Nowadays, there are many reason for health would be improved when some individuals live in cities. Firstly , city dwellers could come easily fitness center and medical center to improve physical well-being as well as relax. All this services almost does not have in countryside. in the rural areas people almost update informations on the television, if they live in cities, people can access modern technology such as laptop, mobile phone, and so on. Specially, approaching to new medical measures could help with diagnosing diseases like cancers to solve a way earliest
However, we have to face a lot of problems in the urban so it could make their health increased. The factories and industry parks are factors that have directly effects on the physical condition. For example, the emission of cars and factories eliminate to environment very much carbon dioxide, a good deal of carbon monoxide and hazardous chemicals. it is causes of lung cancer, respiratory issues. In addition, traffic jam is a common phenomena in the big cities and In the morning as well as in the afternoon usually appear traffic congestion. it could put into pressure to workers, make life busier and do not have enough time to relax
In conclusion I agree with advantage effects that the mega cities would carry out citizens is inevitable. Whereas I believe in the future negative consequences for physical and psychological well-being would decrease
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10507246377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7491253249 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2396362146 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170139655425 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541493910345 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041785235316 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102471988781 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197284726198 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.