Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Nowadays a lot of young people hold important positions in the government. Many people agree that it is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Personally, I definitely disagree that young people can be in important government spots.
There are three main reasons why other people let young people be a part of the government. The first reason is that they are creative and up to date. Creative is one of many things to develop a country because that can help them invent a more creative government system to make our life better. Furthermore, some young people have innovative breakthrough policies. They make a new way to solve a problem and that can be faster than old people’s ideas. For example, young people are hardworking in solving plastic pollution.
Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, I believe that old people can better than young people. Firstly, older people have more experience than young people because they have more chance to communicate with different types of people or situations. Secondly, their working style are generally stable, calm and caring, so they will make fewer mistakes. In policy building, older people have more ways to solve problems because they have read and experienced than young people. Moreover, some young people in developing countries, are getting the job by pulling strings from their family connections, which is defending the social from the higher quality of employers. It’s not fair for who is talented and hard-working to find a job.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly disagree that young people hold important positions in the government. They might make the world become worst. We should let old people hold important positions in government or lets them guide the young generation a bit longer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1644295302 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70456683613 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3829511695 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367687539575 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132137360255 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111994668267 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268714848302 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106937753047 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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