Nowadays most people rely on readymade food due to their excessive busy routine band find it an esay way to satisfy their health on one way or the other . To what extent do you agree or disagree .
In this fast growing pace of life , masses indulge in their office work and in other activities , they have no time to cook cushions for themselves that's what they depend on restaurant food to satisfy their hungry stomach . But some people advocate that fast food or junk food badly impact on human health in various ways . I utterly concur with that fast food hazard for our health . Reason behind agreeing with above given statement would be discussed in the subsequent sections of the essay .
To begin with , being globalization and modernisation people are involving with umpteen working activities for the survival in the society . Because of no time for cooking they relish ready-made food items that is unhygienic and lack of nutrients . Consequently they are suffer with diverse ailments like obesity , cancer , overweight and hear diseases . To illustrate , according to the United Nation report of 2011 , 55% of world population rely over ready-made food that's why obesity and overweight patients ratio growing eminently .
Despite , our younger generation has become inactive and is less interested in sport practices as a result nation builders are not capable to lead their country among others countries . Earlier individual gave more emphasis over providing hygienic and full of nutrients and minerals edible products to their offsprings , which leads to their pupil come forward and take parts in physical games . To exemplify , my cousin Mostly having junk food and they lose their stamina, they have no strength to participate in sports .
To recapitulate , having fast food in excess quantity effect to our health system . Therefore , nations government and parents should have to come together to eliminate this bad habit . parents need to be give to their children home cooked food whereas government needs to impose heavy goods and service tax over that kind of items .
- Childrens should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies .what are the advany and disadvantages to children of doing so ? 61
- The government should educate children about their health right from school by introducing subject like health . Do you agree with this ? 73
- Nowadays most people rely on readymade food due to their excessive busy routine band find it an esay way to satisfy their health on one way or the other . To what extent do you agree or disagree . 89
- more and more people wants own branded clothes, cars and other items. What are the reason behind this . it is a positive or negative change . 56
- Should Government spend more money in improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation ? why ? Give reasons for your answers. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, whereas, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29431438127 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66078246266 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1675800974 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188430521483 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613378459436 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472541338251 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109938038081 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572058715716 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.