Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other parts of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieves this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problem?
In recent days, most individuals try to synchronize between work and other part of life. However, not many reach this balance. In this essay, I would examine the factors of unsettled lives in human world and provides solutions to address them.
To begin with, one big reason people don’t have stability in lives is they are too attached to money. Since, money being the priority so people tend to neglect other activities such as sleep, eat, socialize and so on. Furthermore, the vast majority of adults are working overtime to earn their income and as a result most of them lack in happiness and peacefulness. For example, normal office work is 8 am to 4 pm nonetheless some people not due to corporation pledge of giving extra. Another cause of this imbalance is a significant increase in lifestyle which influenced by the society. For instance, one person gain more cash everyday to fulfil their lavish life because human nowadays will be accept in one community if they are in the same level.
However, to tackle this problem, the business have to take a certain steps which will be beneficial for both of them. the company should provide a flexibility to their employee like working hour and also working place. To extent, it gives relaxation and strength to deal with different situations. For sample, Tokotu inform the staff members that they can work remotely which make them done their job with happy mood. Moreover, individuals must find the right community who welcome them without any excuses as example Funding Organization, the members are inviting whoever want to join as long as the person give positive energy.
In conclusion, unstable lived due to reasons including needing in money and trying to fit in one colony. Therefore, it is important for individuals and companies to give more effort on healthy life but also can achieve their goal and productivity as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reach seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reaches'.
Suggestion: many reaches
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.608759241 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4758255413 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204087246329 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654876981549 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543065706487 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131518170271 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885431498437 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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