Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individual argue that experts like doctors and engineers should be worked in their origin country while others think they must have freedom to choose their work places. In my opinion, I agree that professional should prioritize their home town.
On the one hand, the main factors that highly-trained people should reside in their home country is because one country consist of many provinces whereas not all of them have enough experts. Since, the limits of specialists in their home country so they must prioritize the nearest district. For instance, Indonesia, although a number of hospitals have been build still it is lack in doctors and nurses which result in lots of patients are neglected. In addition, they are familiar with the environments so workers can save more times as they already know the location and daily routes. For example, a technician who urgently request by their leader to repair one building will come in speedy due to their good navigations. Nevertheless, they will stuck and don’t have courage to explore more knowledges.
On the other hand, one of the most reasons specialists should take journey is their freedom to choose where they want to commit. Furthermore, deciding to travel overseas is a basic right according to democratic law. Moreover, they have chances to socialize with new friend from others nations which result in transfer information. To the extend, it will help them broaden their worldview as they communicate with people from different backgrounds and also increase their empathy. For sample, 3 out of 8 people are consider to volunteer far from their home base due to urgent in developing countries such as Burundi, Uganda and Sierra Leone.
However, I assume that individuals which expert in one field must solve the problems in their country before depart to another state. Although, global problems are rising in every parts of the world still remember to help the nearest ahead of others. To illustrate, 3 districts in origin country have a significant rise for some cases like cancer and coronary whereas India has an increase rates in malnutrition. In other words, solve the problem in those districts first before supporting India.
In conclusion from where I stand, it is very importance for professionals to employee in their country due to the need in problem guidance. Nonetheless, it is lies from what perspective the individuals want to see.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...od navigations. Nevertheless, they will stuck and don’t have courage to explore more ...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hich result in transfer information. To the extend, it will help them broaden their worldv...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
... result in transfer information. To the extend, it will help them broaden their worldv...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...country before depart to another state. Although, global problems are rising in every pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1417721519 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71234839958 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1871985242 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.894736842 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7894736842 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306589401921 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888292767111 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813567922838 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178200512675 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104179689176 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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