Nowadays newspapers publish information about private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, media and news coverage has been a part every individual in society. Some people, including methink that government should impose rules and regulations on broadcasting private lives, whereas some claim that media publicity should be freely doing their work.
Imparting people’s life information would possibly violate their personal privacy, especially among famous individuals. When the press easily share celebrities lives whether sportsmen, directors, actors or so on, they may feel that it not only restricts their freedom and rights but also curtails their security and the sense of safty. The second adverse effect which must be into account possibly be on teenager’s conduct. It’s undeniable that the life of even renown people tend to have some unacceptable societal norms, such as scandles, divorce, acrimony, offence which potentially corrupt the young people mind, meaning they might accept such antisocial behaviour.
There are, however, some argue that imposing legeslation and rules would curtail the freedom of speech and press. For example, media censorship has been introduced to filter violent offence and other unaccepted views, but this eventually ended up limiting other opposite views and rights. Moreover, it can not be deny that if the specific kind of information is restricted by the general press, since there is not a clear boundry line or coherent strategy, it will perhaps contribute to other form of social problems like descrimination, racism, fraud and falsehood (incorrect, misleading) information.
Overall, I believe that it is wise to censor the personal information of the society because of the issues related to deviating their (disturbing, invading) privacy and the acute destructive effect on the adolescent’s prospects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... media and news coverage has been a part every individual in society. Some people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, whereas, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73605947955 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90714401051 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698884758364 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4932863981 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.3 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133734533463 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464579726782 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374723133439 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727770646335 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199621649826 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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