nowadays number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their regular doctors.
do you think this a positive or negative development
As the paragraph indicates people nowadays with health problems are trying alternate medicines and treatments instead to visit their regular doctors, according to my opinion this development will be a negative impact. The danger of using wrong medicine will place the person in critical position and the medicines used regularly are habituated by human body, trying an alternative will not be effective.
A person can be allergic to some chemicals unknowingly, the human body structure and anatomy of a person would differ from one person to other. There are two people, one can consume milk without any problem while the other is having issues like getting body rashes and acne. So, consuming of milk is harmful to his body and he is lactose intolerant. The person who is lactose intolerant wanted to try alternate medicine for his other health problem and if that medicine contains any lactose related chemical present in it, that person will be suffering with after effects of intaking the medicine. In a recent survey conducted by "Times of India" people who change treatments regularly are falling ill and facing consequences of medicine after effects.
The human body is structured in a way that the long intake of medicine or food will be habituated by the body, if the regular schedule for person is changed there will be affects for that, the vegan intake meat for the first time would have problem like vomit, stomach upset. This is because meat contains a large portion of protein source. The sudden consumption of high protein affects the body.
in conclusion even though minor health issues like fever, cold can be cured by consuming regular medicines or other alternatives however every health issue cannot be treated like that because it leads to high risk of health damage and need to consult the regular doctor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09210526316 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55178363561 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6892408974 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.727272727 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278769255032 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106518332181 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14290400957 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184421393452 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140779827852 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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