many manfactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar,which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
do you agree or disagree?
As the paragraph describes, the presence of high levels of sugar in many manufactured edible items like food and drinks causing many problems. To prevent the people from intaking of sweets in higher rate by raising its cost. I would definitely agree on the statements that have passed in above line that there should be an idea to make people from consuming high sugar by making its price incline because it is an item for which demand would constant irrespective of the alter in income. This would result in increasing government economy and makes the life of citizens more healthier.
This item is very essential in every individual household and have higher selling rate that increasing the price would not be much effective but, an initial step taken to keep the humans healthy. The declination of amount of sugar produced would start which will result in an individual to eat products with less levels of sugar. In research conducted in 1990 by " BBC " stated that the importance of sugar in our daily life has a great effect, the less quantity takes the less ill that person will be.
The intake of sugar in great quantity would grow fat levels of a person and cause health problems. One can over smart this issue by following a daily routine exercise which would be very efficient for healthier life. The diet balance is also plays a major part like consuming of other items with no sweetness. in research conducted by "BBC" it revealed that people who take less sugar leads a happy and healthy life.
In conclusion, The incline of cost of sugar could bring a change that people consume less sweet and be healthy. furthermore, by implying this idea there is advantage to the government that increased percentage of income on sugar products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...h demand would constant irrespective of the alter in income. This would result in increas...
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Line 1, column 571, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
... economy and makes the life of citizens more healthier. This item is very essential in ever...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun levels is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t in an individual to eat products with less levels of sugar. In research conducted ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...uming of other items with no sweetness. in research conducted by 'BBC' i...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ople consume less sweet and be healthy. furthermore, by implying this idea there is advanta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86468646865 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53407756109 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7618290913 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284320009064 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100888122398 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797727573159 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172129059246 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372969364658 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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