The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, it is becoming tranding that risk of serious health problem due to being obesity. In this essay, I would examine first the reasons that the growth in obesity in society. Second how to solve this problem before coming to reasonable conclusion.
First of all, a lot of people like to consume unhealthy food. It is because unhealthy food is very efficient in this era. Just with your phone to order and you can get it for a few minute. For example in Jakarta, most people are very busy so they don't have much free time to make healthy food. As result, they have unproportional weight because their consume unhealthy food is haven't nutrition. It is clear that, unhealthy food make their body shortage nutrition and make unproportional weight.
The second result is I think the people who have overweight is have a bad lifestyle. The reason are in this milenial are many people relayond on gadget, so they can do anything from their gadget. For exact case with phone, you can be shoping, watching, playing game, order foods and there's a lot you can do. Therefore this lifestyle is not appropriate for the future, because it makes you lazy to move and their fat doesn't burn. It is obvious that bad lifestyle makes people lazy to do activities.
To tackle the problem, they start with themselves by taking care their health, consume a lot of nutrition food and routine exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun minute seems to be countable; consider using: 'few minutes'.
Suggestion: few minutes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77178423237 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49345487125 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564315352697 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7576551024 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275594852453 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928950954851 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760086609657 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172991690844 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116877633399 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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