Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
It is true that to push down rapid growth on the highway and air pollution, the one of best method is to raise the price of fuel. In this essay I totally agree with this statement it is true that escalate price of the fuel can push down growing on the highway and contamination problem for some reasons.
In the one hand, the main advantage if this problem it to create a country can decrease of the congestion levels and to minimize air pollution. It is because nowadays vehicle density and air pollution is becoming serious problem in almost all of country in the world. Taken as an example, with gasoline prices rise building up the mind to find another way more economical for example use public transportation or by using bicycle if the destination is nearby. As result with reduce vehicle create the air cleaner and many people have new lifestyle is better than before. It is clear that escalate the price of petrol is can help a country t o solving problem about air pollution which that problem is a threat for many countries.
On the other hand the disadvantage prices of the fuel increases is when people keep using personal vehicle the cost will be greater and many gas station have income fade. It is due to a lot of people to move their transportation to vehicle are cheaper so gas station will be quiet. For example if the prices of fuel unusually and the prices more expensive so this situation to creat someone needs more money to fuel budget, moreover this condition make many people have to utilize public transportation. So that, their must have more money to estimate if their keep using a vehicles that use fuel oil. It is no doubt that a larger budget to buy petrol making someone loss and disolate of buyer makes gas station loss too.
From where I stand, I believe that if the fuel prices is more expensive, it can set down air polution and can changes people lifestyle better from before like used bicycle to go to every way and using public transportation to diet air pollution. Therefore, because very crucial of this problem must to do something how to tackle about this. Government must make a rule for protecting environment, and as a human must have a good lifestyle to better environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
... the highway and air pollution, the one of best method is to raise the price of fuel. I...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun gas seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much gas', 'a good deal of gas'.
Suggestion: much gas; a good deal of gas
...al vehicle the cost will be greater and many gas station have income fade. It is due to ...
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Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a vehicle' or simply 'vehicles'?
Suggestion: a vehicle; vehicles
...e money to estimate if their keep using a vehicles that use fuel oil. It is no doubt that ...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...e, it can set down air polution and can changes people lifestyle better from before lik...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e, because very crucial of this problem must to do something how to tackle about this. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63131313131 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56479644375 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474747474747 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8312927282 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.266666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188374178961 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635967343419 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067130404181 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111577133347 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548009099936 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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