Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?
Due to the COVID-19 pandemic, it’s not good to go out for shopping frequently and also in our daily life, we are too busy to go shopping everyday. For that reason, shopping online is becoming more and more popular than in-store shopping, and I believe that shopping online is a positive development for our society. Indeed, shopping online is well-known for its convenience, better prices and comparisons.
First, shopping online is very convenient. People can go shopping online everywhere and every time to buy things they need. In a busy life, it is necessary to use time wisely. If you want to buy a certain product, you have to spend time and effort to find the product, then go to that store... Instead of wasting time like that, you just need to click on the online shopping website and choose the product you want to buy and then press the order or purchase button. The delivery staff will deliver to your desired address. So, when shopping online helps you save maximum time and reduce the troubles of life.
Second, people can find better prices on shopping online. Because shops don't have to pay for the rent and other payment, most online shopping websites offer products at a lower price than when you buy outside, but the quality and warranty are still guaranteed as when buying in stores, traditional supermarkets. And during festivals, online shopping websites always have very attractive promotions or games: such as beauty products: promotional cosmetics, home appliances, kitchens, health products, ... to keep customers happy and save money so they can buy more products.
Finally, customer can easily make comparisons of the prodcut they buy. Companies display the whole range of products offered by them to attract customers with different tastes and needs. This enables the buyers to choose from a variety of models after comparing the finish, features, and price of the products on display, Sometimes, price comparisons are also available online, so that you can have an overview of what you want to buy that is suitable for your budget.
To sum up, shopping online is such a great development for our life. We can buy anything through shopping online website everywhere and every time with the best prices. Moreover, because the COVID-19 pandemic is still out there, it’s advisible to go shopping
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ly life, we are too busy to go shopping everyday. For that reason, shopping online is be...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rices on shopping online. Because shops dont have to pay for the rent and other paym...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out there, it’s advisible to go shopping
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02325581395 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55753748372 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529715762274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4903809731 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328810602717 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114378802146 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127593386307 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203740013275 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141363656539 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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