Nowadays, people can use the Internet to learn about the life and culture of another country, so it is optional to travel to another country. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that with the power of the Internet, people can get to know other communities’ and ethnicities’ heritage without the need to leave their motherland. In my opinion, I agree with this statement and I will elaborate on why in my essay below.
With the power of the Internet, we can search for anything about other societies with a relatively correct answer. As a third-world country citizen, I do not have the chance to understand how other communities work. However, since Internet coverage in my nation becomes better, I have had the chance to see more about other countries’ cultures and traditions. This change has not only made a great impact on my life but also on numerous others as it gives people the chance to learn exciting and completely new information that they have never known of before. If people can take advantage of this cutting edged technological invention to brush up on their skills, they can utilize their God-given potential.
Another thing is that they can have a broader range of perspectives on other countries. The Internet is, basically, an enormous archive of human history from documentary films to blog articles. As a result, you can find anything up there. For instance, you can find various approaches to a particular traditional activity or visual assistance on culturally sacred events. This would make the study of another nation much more interesting and give people freedom when they learn.
In conclusion, people can learn about other ethnic’s life and cultures through the Internet as it is convenient and has much more materials for you to research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to excite'.
Suggestion: to excite
... as it gives people the chance to learn exciting and completely new information that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, another thing, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04104477612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85923902954 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6551704621 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278739585131 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952113644698 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051843454129 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172622144368 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594584310573 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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