Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Computers are said to be a fundamental invention in the last few hundred years. In my opinion, I agree with this statement and I will elaborate my thoughts below.
First, computers are the fastest way for us to learn new things. Cutting-edge technology has given us the power to access things that might take a couple of days to get in the past. For instance, numerous academics in the past have had to traverse a whole continent just to have a book with few pages. Whereas people nowadays can sit at home and with a simple click of a button, they can get access to academic-level knowledge. Eventually, this means that everyone will get an equal chance to get access to education and brush up on skills that will be beneficial to them in the future.
In addition, electronic devices have created an entirely new market with immersive potential. With the invention of the computer, people now can buy things that they need without ever having to step out of their houses. Not only it is extremely convenient but also it has formed consumers new habits. This will create a more competitive market as retailers have to make their products work well, yet, the price still needs to be attractive. In the end, consumers will be benefited from this change.
In conclusion, computers are convenient and widely available. Hence, its potential can be used to help humans to take advantage of their God-given potential and buy things with much more competitive pricing.
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...s with much more competitive pricing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, still, well, whereas, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82142857143 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70434397155 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2101676177 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13710763753 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520674233692 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450885871677 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965060790295 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586576877766 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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