Nowadays people get information through the news but are uncertain about the truth of this news Should we believe the journalists what qualities should a good journalist or correspondent have

Essay topics:

Nowadays, people get information through the news but are uncertain about the truth of this news. Should we believe the journalists? what qualities should a good journalist or correspondent have?

Due to the rapid of technology, the news is indeed attacking the aspects of our lives, but in that, what the news actually precise extent. Some others debated that people who are journalists whether are published on the news be worth trusting. What are exactly qualities that could be considered becoming a journalist or correspondent. Looking from an overall perspective, this essay will be discussed of matters mentioned above.
It is not denied that we need to be confident in the reliable sources that coming from the reporter, no matter, it sometimes provides inaccurate information or just spread ill-founded news for more attracts many people. Furthermore, the dweller who wanted to reliance on the journalist is aimed at conveying their desires which need supports from the government. During the Covid-19 pandemic, the source of subsidies of the budget nation that aid poor people, thanks updating information of the journalist that brought the government and residents are got closer, for instance.
Concerning the characteristics of journalist needs versatile quality into the kinds of fields embracing such as business, sports, environment, politics. What meant that is correspondent do not have adequate knowledge in this fields, they could smear by themselves or affects to the whole community with err-news. Obviously, correspondents represented multimedia communications that were carried out news to others, so that a professional person is indispensable. The viewers evaluated journalist’s attitudes are trustworthy in approaching the news because others got lost despicable unto them, which leads to a threat to society.
In conclusion, people are relying on entertainment and media to getting the news and speaking up about their demands to the authorities. Journalists played a primary role contributed to that, trusting them which will be boosted inspirit unto them devoting in their path-way.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...extent. Some others debated that people who are journalists whether are published on th...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ndent do not have adequate knowledge in this fields, they could smear by themselves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56655290102 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16166981853 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7326314917 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301937867684 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983515037211 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444123613853 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168180202691 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486906505731 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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