I contain multitudes
Throughout history, bacteria have an experienced longer existence before appearing in the human race and creatures. With the use of microscopes of could magnify up to 270 times that are not caught up by the naked eye. They are ubiquitous within every form of life, from animals, human health’s, etc.
Each of the species has its own colony, that called microbes. Surprising that half of the human's cells contained 39 trillion bacteria higher than human cells. The consumption of food that we use day-to-day life, we swallow a million microbes in each gram of food. It is not certain that the bacteria are completely beneficial, some research has shown on some microbes could be caused illness to humanity. Indeed, yoghurt or milk that is supposed to natural “friendly bacteria”, seems to bring more benefit to immune systems, with comparison to utilizing of bacteria with its consequences are disrupted the bacteria balance and maybe soared rate of allergies.
It is proved that excessive use of domestic stuff could fight off the bacteria, it could be reversed the progress, and unintentionally danger of bacteria existed. In terms of children, the environment gives exposure to a range of bacteria early with the animal-like dog which may help deter allergies.
In conclusion, the growing problem of bacteria in early days as the whole world, we need to be preparing for a risky situation much as malaria that infects 400 million people a year. In the future, we could build more of a wall within a hospital that adapts to infants receiving a good life.
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| 2021-09-06 | TranMinhDuc | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...life, from animals, human health’s, etc. Each of the species has its own colony, ...
^^^
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that infects 400 million people a year. In the future, we could build more of a wa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03076923077 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78940037246 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2982079425 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0214296183714 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0093532740959 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310213007374 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00976568288941 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169146589351 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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