In the current scenario, self satisfaction and happiness are considered as key points of life. I will not only discuss the above mentioned notion but also give my personal opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
At first, being financially Successful, helps a person to fulfill almost every dream of his life. Likewise silver screen actors, big businessmen, travel every nook and corner of the world and on viewing their travelogues umpteen people get fascinated and ponder that enjoyment is only possible if you have a great bank balance. In this contemporary Era, folks with ample money are respected and are considered to be the most delightful souls on the planet. One can easily get all the tasks accomplished with the power of money and sit back and enjoy every second of life. Sometimes by going on a road trip, attending concerts, exploring world or a day out with family and friends. Alot of web series and films have also showed the importance of money in establishing a successful life full of happiness and luxuries.
On the other hand, although money can give temporary joy yet the stress-free life is the need of the hour. According to the survey, divorce rates of successful celebrities, businessmen and politicians are increased by 30% in last 5 years. In my opinion, prosperity lies in the activities of humanity. Whenever, someone feeds the poor or take an initiative to educate them free of cost , it gives internal contentment which is a lifelong present. However, spending quality time with family and building up a strong relationship with them makes one person feel glad. The presence of a loved one creates a wonderful aura that is stress free and full of harmony. Every person has own way of being happy such as a student when he scores good marks, an officer who is awarded with another medal for his bravery etc.
At last, money and being happy are two separate things. Both are important on their own. Their is happiness in every small thing and money is not needed in every sphere of life .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: opinion
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...fulfill almost every dream of his life. Likewise silver screen actors, big businessmen, ...
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...contemporary Era, folks with ample money are respected and are considered to be t...
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...ey is not needed in every sphere of life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, second, so, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85549132948 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69242906377 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627167630058 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0119305242 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129672227185 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413119945576 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331542388094 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083629136878 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303814756287 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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