Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?
At present, women have more chances while few people believe that it creates more drawbacks rather solve . This essay will describe the point of views with my own opinions.
To begin with, I completely argue with the first statement, because we live in modern era, where everyone feels that men and women have equal rights
for outdoor working. According to the women rights, they can provide different kinds of businesses as well as join in jobs just like an men and help
family to financially. However, women are playing a great role in numerous sectors such as leading the government, managing the company and becoming a pilot. For instance, the government of Bangladesh is a woman who has led the country for ten years successfully. So, if women get support from families, they will be show skills in different sectors.
On the other hand, some individuals are supposed to be opposite from the first statement. Nowadays, divorce rates are higher than the past. In addition, the prominent reason of divorce is that women are working outside and spending less time with families. Due to this women can not manage home properly. According to these problems many females take decision to separate life from partners. Therefore, if men consider above drawbacks, women are getting more chance to develop in society.
To sum up, although it has few problems, however I totally agree with the benefits of working women and government should be taken some steps to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00403225806 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51931779372 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665322580645 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6970333916 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227844960278 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706186729851 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515418063746 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103121712393 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667818708106 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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