Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not going enough physical exercise what do you think there might be the reason? what can be done to in people to have a healthy lifestyle?
CTS UK hotel asli note 8 on healthy life rapidly increasing day by day if sense technology comes in line like a section of society are there there that in this approach masses are not taken seriously about healthy food and physical activities like yoga and exercise which has become a great the rate among the masses and classes there are several positive reason behind this men's elucidated in insurance elements along with a plausible solutions.
first and foremost reason why the masses are unaware about their health that are rapidly increasing in remarkable advancement in technology in various field to be more precise atomos to work done by machine where less manpower need to complete the work owing to this physical movements are using day after day for instance a survey conducted by California University report shown the result now which work done by computer it was a real done by man reduce 89% such as host menu for reduced due to the presence of email for WhatsApp which reduce the man work force and technology makes the people lazy moreover schedule is also significant cause this time period for parents how working due to this they did not get the time to cook food at home time and easily availability of junk food can you buy from restaurant which provide them food on drums of home cooked food most of family member at junk food it is the most prominent reason of obesity is disease not only this but also lack of vitamins proteins effect the masses body consequently they suffer with a physical disease to examplify Australian University report shows 75% people suffer various disease due to the unhealthy food style.
however there are some police civil solution for St government organisation awareness camp to appear the public how to maintain physical fitness for days and format should open sports club to do workout and v and they should give that a name people how to make changes in India Baba Ramdev 614 yoga training people for the same where politician celebrities and sports man also join these camps to motivate the public does this people can take care of their body in schools teacher should be the students about physical activities and healthy diet it is optional children should know the importance of vitamins protein and which type of food is beneficial for their health sports teacher also motivate the students to participate in sports activities so they should keep your health fit and fine going to test a large section of society and healthy diet and overweight and other health issue finally common should make Sanskrit law about british citizen and to to illustrate if any person break the government rules that government should punish and collector them charges as a tax form to examplify in Korea government mail or if any citizen find overweight then they should be charged them text according to the extra weight age by this people are more concentrated their physical exercise or healthy food to maintain their body result Li majority of citizens are fit and fine.
to recapitulate after discussing causes and suitable solution I will imali watch that although there are numerous reason for this man's yet it has a various solutions to mitigate this problem which will help ful to overcome this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2707.0 1615.20841683 168% => OK
No of words: 557.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85996409336 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44557715923 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508078994614 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 139.0 20.2975951904 685% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 481.710234477 49.4020404114 975% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 676.75 106.682146367 634% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 139.25 20.7667163134 671% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153954313492 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081250840079 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414577732503 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081250840079 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414577732503 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 71.1 13.0946893788 543% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -69.61 50.2224549098 -139% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 57.5 11.3001002004 509% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.76 8.58950901804 160% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 57.6 10.1190380762 569% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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