In the modern era, it is universally accepted that tourism has grown and significantly increased its own national income. This essay gives a look at both the pros and cons of the rise in tourism, and I will give my perspective on this topic.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that tourism assists in the creation of jobs. The country’s locals can generate jobs in many fields, such as lounges, bars, casinos, hotels, parks, zoos, entertainment points, and other places of interest. This is an opportunity for local people to work, which also helps them earn a decent income. Additionally, travelers can get a better understanding of the culture of the host nation. This gives the community a chance to shine and improves its reputation globally by satisfying people's preferences with various attractions.
On the other hand, the negative consequences of tourism on the environment are just one of several drawbacks. In an effort to find a good photo moment, visitors frequently inflict harm while there. As a result, this might ruin the attraction's visual appeal. Further drawbacks: Due to its tendency for overconsumption, the tourism industry generates a significant amount of waste and pollution. In fact, on certain beaches, visitors can generate up to twice as much trash as locals. Due to the tremendous strain this can cause, sewage treatment facilities and landfills may overflow.
In a nutshell, the increase in tourism benefits a country in many ways, including job possibilities and economic development. Yet, the related drawbacks, which detract from the attraction's beauty and create pollution, must be addressed. Of course, the government and the local people should maximize its advantages and minimize its disadvantages. disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'attractions'' or 'attraction's'?
Suggestion: attractions'; attraction's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nimize its disadvantages. disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, while, in fact, of course, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35125448029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41759608519 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4986978834 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201479643989 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573210518706 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055527660738 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126596354552 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713916765593 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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