For the tim being, it is undeniable that tourism has been developing to become one of the most significant earning for a country. This following essay will take a look both sides of this argument.
The main benefit tourism brings to the nation is boost in country's economy. Due to increased spending in certain aspects such as public service or entertaining activiteies in attractions, not only does it create new jobs opening for local people but also have opportunies to discover different places for individual travelers. Moreover, tourism assists the local to grab a chance to show itself off, make a good impression on foreign tourists to raise its profile to the world which allow international companies take the country's advantages.
Beside such instrumental merits, there is a drawback that this trend can cause is environmental destruction. These days, to meet tourists' demands, more and more forests are cut down to build ecotourism destinations. The more widesrpead deforestation increase, the more pollutions and natural disasters will happen more often. Our national beauty spots also face up to the risk of being spoiled severely by tourists' bad habits.
Despite this mentioned drawback, it seems to me that tourism has made a more positive contribution to governmental income. If the government, local communites with travelers aware of maintaining the natural beauty and take actions to protect, it will not be a terrible demerit.
On balance, the fact that the boost of national revenue and image-promoting outweighs the rival that it may damage to our natural world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27559055118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97016390857 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.49082982 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127102500746 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463753756223 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443281010789 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655747445321 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403499735326 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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