In this day and age, there is no denying that tourism generates national income to its own country. In this essay, I will examine both advantages and disadvantages of the argument and give my own perspective.
Keeping an eye on the bright side, the development of tourism has a dramatic impact on income. It brings revenue through a widely variety of aspects such as accommodation, food and drink, travel. This money can boost local businesses, improve facility in tourist attractions. Furthermore, tourism is capable of exchanging culture and understanding between nations. This gives to community chances to show itself off and raise its reputation globally.
On the other hand, the ever-developing tourism poses a threat to the environment. Obviously, the unawareness of tourists leads to terrible destruction. Consequently, the nature is losing its beauty. In addition, tourism can accelerate the risk of transmitting diseases. The most prime example is that the Covid-19 pandemic made people come down with it and harm society's health.
Personally, I firmly believe that the good points of tourism outweigh the bad ones. As long as managers and tourists have responsibilities for preserving the local environment.
To sum up, it seems clear that tourism has a significant impact not only on national income but also on country's image-promoting. Despite some trivial drawbacks, I hold the view that the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 56
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 89
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wr 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 79
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('widely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('variety') instead of another adjective.
...ct on income. It brings revenue through a widely variety of aspects such as accommodation, food ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43362831858 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24328737432 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650442477876 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.4386652174 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.75 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315717258211 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078218074848 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782990461228 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151334738755 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106648681675 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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