In today's society, some people believe that tourism could aid in bridging cultural divides between people of different racial and cultural backgrounds. However, some contend that tourism results in the loss of cultural heritage. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of increased tourism and how it impacts various nations.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that tourism promotes peace among people of different races, ethnic backgrounds, and cultural traditions.Visitors will know a lot about the nation they are visiting that the information can be used to solve gaps in culture.Additionally, tourism can assist the community to taking opportunities to promote itself and enhance its profile to the world.
Secondly, i t goes without saying that over time, tourism fosters greater cross-cultural and commercial relationships.There will be an increase in commercial operations related to tourism that are profitable.Additionally, tourism may highlight a nation's potential for economic development and enable large corporations to capitalize on its benefits.
In conclusion, a country's increase in tourism has both advantages and disadvantages. Despite the fact that it significantly increases the nation's wealth and generates jobs, it also has negatives like pollution, cultural commercialization, and financial reliance. If governments and corporations wish to promote the future of tourism, they must take moral measures that place the preservation of the environment, cultural heritage, and a just distribution of tourism benefits as top priority.Today's lucrative trend in tourism connects people from all over the world and generates significant revenue for each nation.
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words
- Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same schools Others however believe that girls achieves better results when educated in single sex school Discuss both these views and give your oipnion 73
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 89
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to it s own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 56
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Visitors
...ic backgrounds, and cultural traditions.Visitors will know a lot about the nation they a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...on can be used to solve gaps in culture.Additionally, tourism can assist the community to ta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...s-cultural and commercial relationships.There will be an increase in commercial opera...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
... related to tourism that are profitable.Additionally, tourism may highlight a nations potent...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...act that it significantly increases the nations wealth and generates jobs, it also has ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 492, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Todays
...ion of tourism benefits as top priority.Todays lucrative trend in tourism connects peo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94331983806 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68268420579 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.765591917 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.5 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16046608778 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798633964552 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042349415286 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959804508218 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310865019854 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.76 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.