For the time being,it is thought that boys and girls should be educated in the same schools.On the other hand,others believe that girls will achieve better results when study in single-sex schools.This essay will discuss these two statements.
First of all,I believe that if boys and girls study in the same school,they will have chances to be educated in a totally-developed environment.They will contact with various people since they were students.They also be less nervous when they acquaint and work with the opposite sex people.In addition,boys and girls have to be brought up and educated without discrimination.None is given priority examination or anything else just due to the gender.I think that being taught in both-sex schools significantly contributes to the gender equality.
On the contrary,studying in single-sex schools will assist girks to the concentration.Girls have a tendency to produce hormones which make them think about ones when they are in love.It will lead to bad score and bad affection on their study.Then,single-sex schools are constructed to prevent this.They will focus on studying,which is of paramount importance.This will pursue their ambition and make them more indipendent.It also get rid of old-fashioned prejudice that girls can not do anything without the helps of boys.
From my point of view,I totally agree with the opinion that both boys and girls should study in the same schools because they must be educated fairly.They will have chances to gain experience from each other or socializing and communicating.
As I have been noted,I can not agree more with the first opinion that boys and girls should not study in separate schools.Both boys and girls must be educated fairly
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ls because they must be educated fairly.They will have chances to gain experience fr...
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...ls should not study in separate schools.Both boys and girls must be educated fairly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, i think, in addition, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36764705882 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38874077112 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.198609349 49.4020404114 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.0 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.4 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39909424599 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247582742779 0.084324248473 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761521467126 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247582742779 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761521467126 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
For the time being,it is thought that boys and girls should b...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... should be educated in the same schools.On the other hand,others believe that girl...
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...ed in the same schools.On the other hand,others believe that girls will achieve better ...
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...esults when study in single-sex schools.This essay will discuss these two statements...
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...ss these two statements. First of all,I believe that if boys and girls study in...
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... boys and girls study in the same school,they will have chances to be educated in a t...
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...ated in a totally-developed environment.They will contact with various people since ...
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...various people since they were students.They also be less nervous when they acquaint...
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...t and work with the opposite sex people.In addition,boys and girls have to be brou...
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... up and educated without discrimination.None is given priority examination or anythi...
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...or anything else just due to the gender.I think that being taught in both-sex sch...
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... will assist girks to the concentration.Girls have a tendency to produce hormones whi...
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... think about ones when they are in love.It will lead to bad score and bad affectio...
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... score and bad affection on their study.Then,single-sex schools are constructed to p...
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...prevent this.They will focus on studying,which is of paramount importance.This will pu...
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...udying,which is of paramount importance.This will pursue their ambition and make the...
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...ambition and make them more indipendent.It also get rid of old-fashioned prejudice...
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...he helps of boys. From my point of view,I totally agree with the opinion that bot...
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Suggestion: They
...ls because they must be educated fairly.They will have chances to gain experience fr...
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...d communicating. As I have been noted,I can not agree more with the first opini...
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Suggestion: Both
...ls should not study in separate schools.Both boys and girls must be educated fairly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, i think, in addition, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36764705882 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38874077112 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.198609349 49.4020404114 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.0 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.4 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39909424599 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247582742779 0.084324248473 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761521467126 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247582742779 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761521467126 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.