Nowadays, the traditions and customs relating to the food we eat and the way we eat are changing. Why is it happening? Do you think this kind of change is positive or negative?
The culinary culture around the world is changing, and this trend has resulted in several consequences accompanying with many negative effects.
Initially, various traditions and customs related to the past are being lost due to the appearance of dietary. people go on a diet for weight loss, for diabetes and for other diseases. consequently, some illness may not be aggregate, and human life may be extended. For example, most of people is claimed to loose weight based on the dietary including some famous celebrities like Kylie Jenner or Kim Kardashian.
Another reason causing the disparity in the eating way and food is the shortage of time. due to the rush of cycle of life in the modern society, the majority have chosen time-saving in way of eating. The example of this tendency is fast food which is served as take-away or drive-through in McDonald, or convenient canned food like bean or frozen food such as sea food are widely sold in the supermarket. These are options for many people whose time is essential.
Therefore, ignoring the negative side of such a trend is hard. Nowadays, several youngster lack of awareness of special dishes. many of them even enjoy the traditional foods on daily life. For instance, while Banh Day is consider as a Vietnamese customs dish, which is only served in a special occasion such as Tet, the majority of young people now turn that into an ordinary breakfast. this affects directly to the cultural value of the food as younger generations may lose awareness of such special dishes. Furthermore, since food provided by the supermarket is one of the best selection to avoid time-consuming, many still dubious that the food may contains contamination, and this will create adverse effects on the human-kind’s well being.
In conclusion, the negative impacts has emerged in accordance with the difference in the way of eating of human. I suppose the trend will grow further in the future. However, it is critical for human beings to keep the old traditions and customs from the past as a part of cultural heritage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0144092219 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84567504093 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5133824269 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183473153291 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550559175467 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485857347511 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979309232913 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347102898136 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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