Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The interaction has changed today because of the technology which allow people to keep in touch from away, cities or even counties.

The positive of that change is that we can keep in touch 24/7 no matter whether we are in the same city or country. The positive things are not finishing here, also because of the new technology nowadays you could do almost everything we can buy or sell, we can study or learn even you can work at home from your computer. Here is one example: I could not keep my relationships with the people who lives far away if there was not internet. Because of the internet I could continue my friendships or relationship with girl even if it is far away.

However, that will not change the feeling of meeting friends in person. In contrast to the positive, the negative is that we are becoming more lazy because we are able to do almost everything through the phone, tablet or computer. Also there are people using the internet for making fake profiles and not to be themselves. However, here some example how people using the internet, making fake profiles and pretending for someone else. Once I met girl on the internet site for dating she seem to be nice she was very polite during our online conversations but when the time came to meet in person everything was totally different. So that is one of the negative sides of the nowadays technology.

In conclusion there are a lots of positive sides of technologies which In fact is helping us for relationship in long distance and few negative things.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The interaction has changed today because of the technology ...
^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...her we are in the same city or country. The positive things are not finishing here,...
^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
... can buy or sell, we can study or learn even you can work at home from your computer...
^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... through the phone, tablet or computer. Also there are people using the internet for...
^^^^
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'seems'.
Suggestion: seems
...irl on the internet site for dating she seem to be nice she was very polite during o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erson everything was totally different. So that is one of the negative sides of the now...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
... technology. In conclusion there are a lots of positive sides of technologies which...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65808823529 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58453267496 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533088235294 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5143766533 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214075962674 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852697461905 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444056620562 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134729424863 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250570706885 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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