Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this happen?
What can government dot to help reduce the amount of litter?
The waste production has become contentious topic as it is rising at an alarming rate through industries and households.Although increasing rubbish is happening due to certain reasons such as packaging items and the causal attitudes of people, this occuring can be reduced by enacting stringent laws and using recycling system.
Firstly, packaging materials significantly affect to increase the production of litter.In other words, nowadays companies use variety of packaging such as plastic polythene and rubber which are more attractive whereas this is not only non-decomposable but also non-biodegradable .Therefore due to this pacakaging material ,the production of trash has risen.secondly, careless attitude of people is another reason for excessive production of litter.Clearly, the attitudes of people have changed as they prefer to acquire new things instead of reusing and repairing the old ones .As the mass consumption of new items are discarded which lead to the escalation of litter production.So these are two factor which are responsible for excessive production of garbage.
The solutions are not simple but they do exist.The government should enact strict laws that will force to companies to use only bio-degradable materials for packaging purposes.As well, to use materials that decompose easily, manufacturers should invent new packaging material that can be recycled.This will automatically reduce the amount of litter.Moreover, government should encourage to people to adapt recycling method.For instance, recently , i read on facebook about a beach in Australia where machines are installed and people can buy food amd beverages by submitting used plastic bottles.So these kind of motivational activities should be introduced.
In conclusion, though many reasons such as the use of plastic packaging materials and careless attitude of humans contribute to increase in waste production , solutions can be taken to mitigate this amount of litter which are by implementing stringent laws and promoting recycling process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83388704319 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3664078165 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.554852057 49.4020404114 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 439.0 106.682146367 412% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.25 20.7667163134 362% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 7.06120827912 552% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143933401534 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887939199005 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00521347552618 0.0667982634062 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887939199005 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00521347552618 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.7 13.0946893788 334% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.57 50.2224549098 -43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 11.3001002004 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.72 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.18 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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