Nowadays, young people are admiring media and sport stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Century is full of idols around the world loved by youth tremendously despite of negative content they deliver and influence they have on one's life. In short, major benefits comparing to minor disadvantages can be found in this statement and proofs are going to be revealed in the following steps.
Following a star has huge impact in one's upbrining, especially young generation's, since enthusiasm of them is a power to explode if it is directed properly and effectively. A child with an idol in his life is more humble than one without, this is key to work more, try more and reach more in their prosperity and career goals.
Another positive tendency is acquiring their wearing fashion, mindset and life-style as it is belived that one becomes more, what he observes more so that looking a lot up more attracts much into youth life as low of attraction does.
Intending a person to sharpen skills is must these days, as this is a factor people are suffering from shortage of it. Number of young fascinated by sport starts has tripled in the last decade, with the advent of high technology and easy access to the Internet they get motivation from achievemnts of athlets. Moreover, sport stars may intertain population by concuring international arenas.
Nevertheless, there is a drowback tendency in getting celebrities close to their choices if they upload too harmful content on their social webpage regularly since young tends to adapt habits on their skill-set.
To conclude, famous individuals are loved more by adolecence audience and its plus sides are further more than its minus one in my personal standpoint.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0405904059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75610928608 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642066420664 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7067140878 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111600723398 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461404725051 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027085461325 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05247877578 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389563695568 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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