In this fast-paced world, Leisure activities are playing a vital role in everyone's life to keep their mind fresh and active. Many people put forth that spending free time in shopping centres may affect the young generation and also hamper the local communities. I agree with the assertion as I believe that recreational activities and contributing to the local community are the keys to combat the negative effects.
Nowadays, shopping has become a favourite time-pass which have become a worrying trend that looks set to continue. As a consequence, youngsters are getting mesmerised to more and more shopping centres. Instead of playing outdoor games and taking interest in traditional activities, spending your leisure time in shopping malls has become far more prevalent in big cities which begets not only lowering down the value of local communities but also affect the health of youngsters. For instance, researchers have proven that children who play outdoor games are more likely to have active brains than those who sit-back lethargic and stick to screen games in gaming centres.
On the contrary, it has been suggested that young people should invest their free time in learning new skills to contribute in the society such as learning traditional skills from elders, taking interest in learning a different language. Also, playing outdoor games like cricket with friends helps the young ones to keep their body healthy as well as active. For example, It has been proven by several facts that different language always open gates for better opportunities such as English which is a gateway to the world and no one will be deprived of the opportunities arises for those who have strong command on this language.
In conclusion, even though shopping malls is one of the positive ways for relaxing mind, the excess of spending time there may hamper local communities as well as the health of youngsters. Contributing time in outdoor activities is the key.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69316263898 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6856769802 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221749770291 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080079024596 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734843253969 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134321069636 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506279564023 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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