the number of countires, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Improving accommodation such as rail way stations is necessary for a some countries and government should spend the bigger currency for it. However, some people assume that it is better to increase the quantity of public transportations. I believe that all of actions need to be thought for the goodness of all sides by the administration both for the state and its own community.
Generally speaking, existing more and more public transportation such as but it is not really involved by the predominantly population in this advance era. Nowadays, more society have their own vehicles to use and it is more effective because they do not need to think about waiting a taxi to go to their office. In addition, producing more transportation for the publics will be more increasing the air pollution that can bring disadvantages not only for the state but also the health of populations itself so that the administers should measure it out more.
On the one side,most of people assume that the government should spend much money in constructing the up-to-date railway lines for rapid trains among regions in high population. It can reduce the traffic jam in urban city caused by the other transportations. For example, the traffic jam in Jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia, have driven being worse so that the ministry create the remarkable ide to build MRT -one of the fast railway system for train using electrical power. Thus, most of people are satisfied due to accommodation. Moreover, it can avoid the hazardous of air pollution caused by huge transportations such a bus.
To summary, a trebling in total of transportation using fuel is the detrimental though due to its disadvantages. By contrast, improving the railway lines for train is the noteworthy ide even though it has to spend much currency of the state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...d measure it out more. On the one side,most of people assume that the government should spend...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...for train using electrical power. Thus, most of people are satisfied due to accommodation. Mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, so, thus, as to, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00657894737 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07252338164 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8901890147 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274822103829 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886450756123 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616404674143 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154750839546 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489053880094 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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