The number of people who at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing .
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society ?
How can this problem be solved ?
Number of individuals are influencing by various health diseases, because of, overweight. unhealthy diet and less physical moments of the body are the main reasons behind this. this could be tackled easily by providing adequate amount of nutrition to the body and doing some physical exercise on regular basis.
Firstly, the reason behind the overweight of a person is unhealthy food items. In other words, these days everyone gives first preference to spend their maximum time to their job locations, due to which, they have not enough time left to spend on making food items. As a result, they are forced to consume oily food, which leads to overweight. Second major reason is that people have very restless schedule, owing to which, they are incompetent to find some time from their daily plans for doing physical activities.
There are two effective measures which could be helpful for mitigating this trend. On way to overcome this problem is to ensure healthy diet. people should be more conscious about their health and must give priority to eat home made food. this is only possible when they give some time to make food at their home. Another obvious solution is to indulge yourself in any kind of physical activity. physical movements of body are crucial for proper digestion of food and to reduce the effect of diseases. For instance, thyroid is a symptom of overweight, which could be controlled by doing this.
To conclude, if a person is physical fit then he could capable to perform their work efficiently. healthy food items and physical exercise are keys to ensure healthy body. if people implement these solutions, they would become much healthier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, then, for instance, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07194244604 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47574016695 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.073399299 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9411764706 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210882283798 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717514395695 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529742523541 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122885587654 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686232900056 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.