A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an institution or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement
Recently, with regard to the tertiary education, many courses obligate students to participate in an internship term including voluntary works and practising in institution and organisation as a credit of their programme. Aiming in this essay, I will address some prominent benefits as well as determining drawbacks.
As a whole, probation term is the almost essential course for students who want to build endurance up in the workplace and polish up their skills and working styles. Consequently, The first vitally important advantage is the improvement of skills and abilities. Also noteworthy is the fact that, for example, when practising in volunteer work of their programme, students will eventually develop their social skills including soft skills and practical skills, such as interpersonal and flexibility ability. Additionally, the more time they spend on the participation of internship, the more confident and reflexible they get. Little wonder, students will also enhance their sources of practical perception and eager to figure out some mistakes that they had made.
Further and more importantly, The second principal development for students attending an internship term in university and company is the application of academic theory in a practical period. Hence, while working in the environment related to their fields, colleges will able to be more acknowledgeable and comprehensible in such complex theories of their majors. For instances, if students join in an internship psychology course, they will broaden their horizons and understand the theory in reality by collaborating with professors and patients in hospitals. Further, Probation not only opens more opportunities to students for their skill enhancements but also supports students to apprehend the deep penetration of knowledge of their learning.
In stark contrast, however, opponents believe that this situation could bring negative results such as the degradation of student's grade and distraction on academic field. Firstly, Having spent too much time on voluntary work, the decline of student's overall grade appears to be seen as the main drawbacks. Secondly, students who are very passionate about those works sometimes feel hard to concentrate on their tertiary education. As a result, there are more students who drop out of school for those reasons.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm again my position that this situation brings more advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.093128748 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2058911287 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221163793294 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736218577694 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575007746035 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128345297412 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587534872926 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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