old buildings
There are many old buildings constructed long time ago which were designed for people in those times to live in comfortably, but they are not suitable for citizens to live in now. It is important to figure out the potential consequences and try to solve the problems.
One possible problem is that people who live in old buildings cannot enjoy modern facilities because it is difficult to construct basic infrastructures in these buildings without any disruption. Towns and cities built in previous centuries were designed and constructed according to the demands in that age and are lack of fundamental systems which are necessary in these days such as electric system. People who live in old towns may find it extremely inconvenient if they cannot use household appliances such as air conditioners and washing machines.
In order to solve this problem, the government can remove these old buildings and build new ones if they are not historic relics. The previous owners will be glad if they can lead a new life in modern houses as long as they are well arranged by the government during the process of pulling down old buildings and constructing new ones. If the old buildings are of great historical value, it is a wise choice to repair and maintain them carefully and change these buildings into tourist spots or museums. In this way, the history of the town and city can be preserved completely and local residents have the opportunity to understand the history, which is beneficial to strengthen their cultural identification. Moreover, local people can make a living by being tour guides in the museum or opening up restaurants around the tourist spot, which can help promote the local economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00350877193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81893085959 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6727419209 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350593826851 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154504123266 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15009582968 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234494720182 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569254610515 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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