One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
There are a lot of results of expanded health care. One of the most remarkable impact is that people can have a longer live and lifetime is improving. However, there are some drawbacks. In my opinion, the positives of this extending is greater than the negatives.
Firstly, people can have life expectancy longer than before. Medical care methods are improved in curing and diagnosing fatal diseases. For instance, if person who is taken the HIV disease is diagnosed early, they can have an opportunity to be treated and live longer. Old people can have more time to live with their children and grandchild. Spreading their traditional for their seeds and young people will know more about their ancestors.
Secondly, the time and fund for services is decreased. State-of-the-art technology is applied in hospital reduced the time for curing. People do not need to spend too much time to live in the hospital, so that the money in paying for services is cut down. A good example of this is people who has a broken leg just spend a little time to cure which is faster than in the past.
However, there is another side to the coin and improving medical care also has its drawbacks. One of these downsides is the charge for expanding health care is very expensive. Cutting-edge technology health care takes more time to create and manufacture. Thus, it has a costly price and few hospitals can invest modern equipment.
In conclusion, everything has two sides and not apart from expanding health care. Nevertheless, the benefits of this improving are more worthy than the problems
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- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 59
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91044776119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68889824242 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8752528956 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2631578947 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1052631579 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222754995421 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672683890616 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541355435832 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120435888141 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351227685275 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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