Online learning is better than traditional classroom Do you agree or disagree

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Online learning is better than traditional classroom. Do you agree or disagree?

It goes without saying that online learning in the COVID-19 period is one of the hottest discussions today. Although there might be some advantages studying through the Internet, I believe that this kind of education does not outweigh the traditional one, and it will be taken a look in the following points.

The first argument is that online classes cannot one hundred percent replace the offline classroom in terms of technique and communication. Students and teachers attend classes taken through the Internet may have connecting problems and lack of supported device, hence student-teacher interaction might be disrupted. Connections between tutors and learners could never be as tight in online courses as in offline classes.

Secondly, not only do streaming classes lack of connections but it is also hard to establish a disciplined atmosphere among the classes. On-campus courses acquire pupils to adhere to class rules and guidelines which have been a tradition in years. The rules would help students to be more attached to their school work. Another advantage of offline education is that the use of electric devices would be lessen as lessons and learning materials could be given directly instead of downloaded ebooks, decrease the chance of health problems.

In conclusion, online learning could do favor temporarily, whereas traditional classroom is the most sustainable in the long term. That said, the Internet is a powerful tool for improvements. Teachers and educationallists should make the most out of the Internet to make educating more fulfilling.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, look, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43089430894 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95741695135 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2853468533 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145221714659 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560527276512 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729397642344 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926804326242 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382451260049 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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