Online learning: do pros outweigh cons?
Technology advances have revolutionized how we study and learn, igniting curiosity whether online learning is beneficial or detrimental to our learning process. I believe that the drawbacks of this learning method can eclipse its merits.
Advocates of online learning may argue that this method can allow learners to learn, irrespective of geographical barriers. Simply with a click of a button and internet access, people can learn almost everything that they desire without travelling long distances, rendering the learning process easier than ever before. By the same token, online learning can open a world of opportunities for students to broaden their range of knowledge as they can gain access to a plethora of courses, and materials related to their area of interest from various sources. For example, a student in Vietnam can easily enroll in English courses conducted by Oxford University in the UK without having to travel here.
However, I would contend that the downside is more significant. Prolonged exposure to screens can lead to numerous serious medical conditions, such as deteriorated eyesight, diabetes, obesity or even stroke in the worst scenario. Aside from this, it is also important to note that online learning requires self-discipline from learners, when lacking, can negate this learning method even though they can access a wealth of information online. Finally, online learning can deprive them of the chance to interact with their teachers and peers regularly, resulting in terrible communication skills. This problem manifests itself starkly in the Covid-19 pandemic. Students, after going back to school, are reported to encounter social awkwardness due to a lack of consistent and continuous interaction.
In conclusion, while online learning can confer certain benefits concerning learning distances and the availability of information and materials, I believe that these benefits can be overshadowed by its disadvantages, given the potential illnesses, a lack of self-discipline, and social interaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07101669351 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2665408624 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194170787443 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755450690952 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694843553275 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142220173878 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381772145067 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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